the war horse

Yesterday we had to do a Memoir poem about a character in our novel study story. we had to do three feeling at the end to tell what the thing was feeling. If there is something I need to do better tell me. Hope you like it. 

The farm was fun enough,

It had a strong Zoey  plowing in the field,

damp fields drying, as well as

wooden fences enclosing the horses

Hardworking man directing the horse,

old animals tugging ropes,

drunk dad screaming at the horses to go faster

Exhausted, angry, sad

Doing everything in my power to try my best