Hannah

The other day we had to write a prose about someone in our life. We had to use an A.N.V plan. we were learning to activate the nouns and describe their features. If there anything I need to improve tell me. Hope you like it.

Her long, sandy blonde hair is swaying from side to side as she runs along. Hannahs warming smile is always lighting up my day.  Her intelligent brain working away impresses me. She has a great personality that is the  bouncy type. She has pretty blue eyes that are flickering in the sun. Hannahs rosy red cheeks wiggle as she laughs. Her pink lips look nice as she smiles. Her hard head is protecting her brain. Brown eyebrows lie above her eyes. Helpful Hannah is always helping people.