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Showing posts with label winter. Show all posts
Showing posts with label winter. Show all posts

Wednesday, 16 August 2017

snow

I am learning to create an image in my mind, with a noun ( frost)  depicting the weather at this time of year in Southland.
I am then learning to write a description for this image,  using strong, appropriate and effective verbs to activate the nouns and one or two similes.


My breath goes out of my mouth clearly like a dragon's breath.
Ball of sparkling white snow are falling covering my head in snow. Cold Camouflaged cats sneak slowly into the house thinking their not being watched.  Hungry chickens looking for any kind of food. Little snowman growing to be big snowman overnight. Big blobs of snow are sliding off the roof of the chicken house. The house roof top is getting smothered with snow like mite on toast.

My breath goes out of my mouth clearly like a dragon's breath.