Tuesday, 4 July 2017
The Big Quest
This weeks prompt was ¨now what do I need¨. I was focusing on changing the opening of a sentence and using level 4 punctuation. . ? , ! ... ´ ¨ ¨ ; : ( )
Danielle and Cooper were sprinting to save their parents. Their parents had been stolen by a wicked witch called Gizelda. They were on there way to the witches castle… “Don’t come any closer” screamed their Mum. Faster than a cheetah, the witch flew down on her broomstick. “Now what do I need?” said Gizelda If you want your parents to live get me these things: Merlin´s wand and a tooth from a fire breathing Dragon.” “You can’t!” yelled their Mum. “We have to; bye.” Longing to save their parents they set out on a dangerous journey and never came back...
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Hi there Danielle, my name is Parwin and when I read your story, it was really interesting and I think that you nailed it. Where did you get the witches name because it was really interesting? If you want to see my blog then here it is...
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