Nana cathy

This week we did a description about someone. We had to write about their face, hair, skin, voice and personality. It could be a person we look up to or a family member except it couldn’t be someone that lived with us. I did mine on my Nana and some other people did their nana or grandpa. This is mine and I hope you like it.

My Nana is a lovely lady who knits and makes me feel better. Her skin has brown freckles all over it like a cheetah. She has wrinkles on her cheeks and forehead.  She has soft, smooth, thin skin that makes her snuggly and warm to cuddle.

Her hair is spiky when I touch it. It is short and sticks out in lots of directions. It is grey, white and the dark colour that it was in her earlier years, a real mixture of three colours. It’s soft especially when she has just had a shower.

Her bright blue eyes look down at me when she is talking to me. Her little smile makes me feel better when i’m not feeling well. Her little wrinkles move as her smile gets bigger. She has some brown freckles on her 70 year old face.

snow

I am learning to create an image in my mind, with a noun ( frost)  depicting the weather at this time of year in Southland.

I am then learning to write a description for this image,  using strong, appropriate and effective verbs to activate the nouns and one or two similes.

My breath goes out of my mouth clearly like a dragon's breath.

Ball of sparkling white snow are falling covering my head in snow. Cold Camouflaged cats sneak slowly into the house thinking their not being watched.  Hungry chickens looking for any kind of food. Little snowman growing to be big snowman overnight. Big blobs of snow are sliding off the roof of the chicken house. The house roof top is getting smothered with snow like mite on toast.

My breath goes out of my mouth clearly like a dragon's breath.

Hannah

The other day we had to write a prose about someone in our life. We had to use an A.N.V plan. we were learning to activate the nouns and describe their features. If there anything I need to improve tell me. Hope you like it.

Her long, sandy blonde hair is swaying from side to side as she runs along. Hannahs warming smile is always lighting up my day.  Her intelligent brain working away impresses me. She has a great personality that is the  bouncy type. She has pretty blue eyes that are flickering in the sun. Hannahs rosy red cheeks wiggle as she laughs. Her pink lips look nice as she smiles. Her hard head is protecting her brain. Brown eyebrows lie above her eyes. Helpful Hannah is always helping people.

the war horse

Yesterday we had to do a Memoir poem about a character in our novel study story. we had to do three feeling at the end to tell what the thing was feeling. If there is something I need to do better tell me. Hope you like it. 

The farm was fun enough,

It had a strong Zoey  plowing in the field,

damp fields drying, as well as

wooden fences enclosing the horses

Hardworking man directing the horse,

old animals tugging ropes,

drunk dad screaming at the horses to go faster

Exhausted, angry, sad

Doing everything in my power to try my best