For the Novel Study Room 4 is doing, we had to do a 100 word challenge about the first 3 chapters in a characters perspective. I chose Joey the horse that the book's about.
The year is 1914. Today I left my mother and reluctantly went with a strange man. He pulled me and put me into a farm cart. The weathers pleasant and sometimes frosty. My home is a large farm in the country. I live with Albert, his parents and Zoey another horse. My name is Joey. My life at the farm has been hard work called ploughing but I’m fine as long as Zoey is beside me. One day Albert's Dad came running screaming “It’s the war”. One day Albert’s Dad came, took me away, and sold me to the cavalry.
Monday 31 July 2017
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Dear Danni
ReplyDeleteIt sounds great you need to work on making it flow better because you go from putting in a trailer to describing the seen.
Sophie